When my group presented our pitch we had quite positive feedback. The idea was liked but needed to be in more detail in terms of thinking about set, costume and lighting. We were told we needed to be clearer on the scenes/ locations the band will be performing in or the narrative will occur in so that we knew exactly what will happen where and when and we can plan further. To do this my group will plan together exactly what will happen and what we need to allow this to happen. We were told it might be hard working with children but using a child that does professional acting work would be great for the job. We will plan what is going to happen at each point of the song so that we have enough film to cover the length of the song and we know what set and how many actors we will need in the music video.