It's good to see some record on the blog of the progress that you have made this week, Daisy. I would like to have a clearer idea of how you came to your initial concept, as outlined in the pitch and why you thought this would work well. To support this, you must have some reference to your target audience and your institutional context; at the moment these are both missing from your pitch.
It's good to see some record on the blog of the progress that you have made this week, Daisy. I would like to have a clearer idea of how you came to your initial concept, as outlined in the pitch and why you thought this would work well. To support this, you must have some reference to your target audience and your institutional context; at the moment these are both missing from your pitch.
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